Part 201

Part the Two Hundred First:  Back From the Sea

  

 

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Total. 

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Darkness.

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Air?

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None.

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Nose?

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Blocked.

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Mouth?

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Blocked.

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Scream.

Bubble.

Tickle.

Eyelashes.

Follow bubble.

Light.

Above.

Dark.  Below.

Lights.  Yellow.  Orange.

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Shadows.

Long.  Pointed ends.

Ships?

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Smaller?

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Drag.  Weight.

Feet.  Kick.  Boots.  Off.

Tug.  Pants.  Pull.  Slip.  Out.

Lighter. 

Light.

Legs kick.  Arms grab.

Light.  Light.

Splash.

Air!

Breathe!

Screams!  Others’.

Smoke!  Flames!

Breathe.

Out.  Hard. 

In.  Harder.

Tiring.

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Sinking.

Water.  Nose, throat.

Salty.

Flail.  Pull.

Move.

Tiring.

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Tired.

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Dark.

Water.

Light.

Flail.

Rest.

Water.

Flail.

Rest, and water.

Flail, and rest, and water, and flailing and resting and water until flailing and resting.

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Until dark.

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And then, Hope considered her situation…

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2 responses to “Part 201

  1. Artie

    Freaking awesome!! I’m assuming Part 200 was left blank due to Hope’s unconsciousness. If that being the case and the above being her return to
    unconsciousness, than freaking awesome!!

    Er, if not, than I’m totally lost ;).

    Artie

  2. Right on the money, Artie. Yep, that’s exactly why Part the Two Hundreth does a world of good for keeping my less-than-550-words-per-Part average in line.

    And thanks for the comment.

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